Monday, March 2, 2009

Essay Outline

Essay's Outline

Title: Divorce is a result to the mistrust among married couple. What causes mistrust among them?

Plan of Development:-

Thesis Statement:

There are several causes that causing the mistrusts between married couple and they are attitude, disloyalty and the miscommunication among the married couple.


Main Idea 1: Attitude

- cannot adapt with marriage world (sharing with couple)

- Still cannot let go old habit

- Partner may abuse his or her partner through physical and emotional abuses.

Main Idea 2: Disloyalty

- Either husband or wife starts to be disloyal

- Either husband or wife may disagree with either one’s decision

- cheat their couple

Main Idea 3: Miscommunication

- Either one of the couple starts an argue on silly things

- Cannot tolerate with each other

- Misunderstood instructions

Main Idea 1's Topic Sentence:

The first main factor that can lead to mistrust between married couple is attitude of the couple.

Supporting details 1: cannot adapt with marriage world

Supporting details 2: still cannot let go old habit

Supporting details 3: partner may abuse his or her partner through physical and emotional abuses.

Main Idea 2's Topic Sentence:

The second factor is disloyalty among the married couple.

Supporting details 1: either husband or wife starts to be disloyal

Supporting details 2: either husband or wife may disagree with either one’s decision

Supporting details 3: cheat their couple


Main Idea 3's Topic Sentence:

Finally, the factor that leads to mistrust among married couple is miscommunication

Supporting details 1: Either one of the couple starts an argue on silly things

Supporting details 2: Cannot tolerate with each other

Supporting details 3: Misunderstood instructions

Conclusion:

In conclusion, mistrust between married couples is the main aspect that will lead to the divorce of them. In order to maintain the harmonious condition in our marriage, we should somehow try to tolerate with our mate. Also, we need to avoid being harsh with our mate. We may have our own ego, but we somehow should tolerate with our wife or husband. So, we must be good with our mate in order to maintain our marriage.

1 comment:

Unknown said...

wow pndainye die. o.0